Phantom's Temple

The Temple => The Treasure Room => Topic started by: The Bamboo Forest on July 26, 2009, 05:43:06 PM

Title: [XCLUS. PREVIEW] - Wild Jungle NEW STYLE!
Post by: The Bamboo Forest on July 26, 2009, 05:43:06 PM
That's right, Wild Jungle is finally back after a short hiatus. I've been working on an experimental project, and implementing a new "storylike" style of writing on the previous episodes. Remember that this may not be the finalized style--it's just a preview for now--and I look forward (and I hope you do too) to the return of Wild Jungle.

One more thing: PLEASE vote on the poll. It would ultimately decide my decision on whether two change the fanfic style or not. So without further ado, here's a little snippet of the "converted" Episode One...

LOTHT Wild Jungle
Season One, Layout One, Episode 1

The camera makes its way through lush greenery, and the palms move away as ambient animal noises are heard. Suddenly, the jungle ends, and we see Olmec?s face light up and shout, ?LEGENDS OF THE HIDDEN TEMPLE!?

The show?s title card?a pendant of life?crashes together on the screen, and the camera shifts to focus on the temple and its rooms. ?With your guide, Kirk Fogg! And here he is now!?

The pendant splinters and the camera fades to Kirk coming down the steps of the temple.

?Thank you, thank you!? says Kirk. ?It's nice to see you! Thank you, Olmec. Welcome to the Hidden Temple. The rooms are filled with lost treasures that are protected by mysterious Mayan Temple Guards. Only Olmec knows the legend behind each of the treasures in his temple. Which one are we going to hear about today??

Olmec replies, ?The Legend of Captain Kidd and the Hanging Rope!?

?Ah, the legend of Captain Kidd and the Hanging Rope,? says Kirk. ?Well, the legend is set and one of these six teams will have the chance to retrieve the rope. Will it be The Red Jaguars??

At this point, the camera focuses on each team as they are introduced.

? The Blue Barracudas??
?The Green Monkeys??
? The Orange Iguanas??
?The Purple Parrots??
?Or the Silver Snakes??

?They?re going to have to pass some tough mental and physical tests,? continues Kirk, ?and in the end, only one team will have the right to enter Olmec?s temple, but first they have to cross the moat, and here's how they're gonna have to do it today.

?Before you lies an ancient bridge that is stripped. There is a rope above and one below. When I say go, one player from each team will hang from the top rope and walk across the bottom one. When a partner drops, he must go back and try again. When the second partner reaches the other side, he must get down and run over here and hit the gong!

Kirk hits the Red Jaguars? gong.

?The first four teams to hit their gong will go on to the Steps of Knowledge! Are you ready??

The teams excitedly reply, ?Yeeaahhhh!?

Kirk then asks, ?Are you ready Olmec??

?Rock on!? replies Olmec.

? Teams,? says Kirk, ?On your marks.....get set........GO!?

With this energetic kickoff, the six teams immediately start traversing the two ropes. ?They?re going slowly but surely,? comments Kirk, just as the Red Jaguars slip and fall off the ?bridge?. The Orange Iguanas are quick, and begin to send their second player over, as do??The Silver Snakes!? says Kirk.

SKLOOSH! The boy on the Purple Parrots splash into the water, while the Orange Iguanas and the Silver Snakes gong in?quickly followed by?.

?The Red Jaguars and the Blue Barracudas!? yells Kirk as they gong in at the same time. ?We have our four teams! Going on to the Steps of Knowledge are the Red Jaguars, the Blue Barracudas, the Orange Iguanas, and the Silver Snakes! Green Monkeys and Purple Parrots did a great job. We got a nice gift for them, and here's what it is.?

?A prize package from Nestle! Hey kids, here?s an easy act to follow?turn an ordinary glass of milk into a thick choclatey treat, and create a disappearing act of your own! Nestle Quik?it?s magic in the making!?


I hope you guys liked it, and don't forget about the poll! Thanks!
Title: [XCLUS. PREVIEW] - Wild Jungle NEW STYLE!
Post by: Purple Parrots Fan on July 26, 2009, 07:30:18 PM
I say "Awesome! Go ahead and use it!" I like the style of writing and well, I think its a good idea. So yeah, you should use it!
Title: [XCLUS. PREVIEW] - Wild Jungle NEW STYLE!
Post by: The Bandit King on July 26, 2009, 07:35:19 PM
Looks fine to me. Go for it, man!
Title: [XCLUS. PREVIEW] - Wild Jungle NEW STYLE!
Post by: Asian Legends Fan on July 26, 2009, 09:10:53 PM
I said "Play with it a little more", but it is pretty good. I just think it could maybe use some more tweaking.
Title: [XCLUS. PREVIEW] - Wild Jungle NEW STYLE!
Post by: The Ancient Warrior on July 26, 2009, 09:17:29 PM
I said "You copied The Ancient Warrior. >:(" :P

Yup, I actually voted that for shits and giggles, but to give a serious opinion, I say go for it if you really feel up to it.
Title: [XCLUS. PREVIEW] - Wild Jungle NEW STYLE!
Post by: The Bamboo Forest on July 27, 2009, 06:41:09 PM
^ Oh, you evil. :D

The sad thing is, there's another person who did that, and I'm afraid that whoever that was is giving a serious opinion.
Title: [XCLUS. PREVIEW] - Wild Jungle NEW STYLE!
Post by: The Ancient Warrior on July 27, 2009, 07:48:11 PM
Hey, that's bound to happen. lol

Still, check where the majority lies as of yet.
Title: [XCLUS. PREVIEW] - Wild Jungle NEW STYLE!
Post by: The Bamboo Forest on July 28, 2009, 05:09:47 PM