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Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 25, 2007, 12:14:15 PM
Legends Of The Hidden Temple: The Return
Episode: 1
Layout:1

Opening

(Camera moves through a thick forest)
(Olmec appears)
Olmec: LEGENDS OF THE HIDDEN TEMPLE!
(The crowd is all happy and screaming)
(The camera does a walkthrough of the upper floor)
Olmec: WITH YOUR GUIDE: KIRK FOGG!
(Kirk swings in on a vine.)
Olmec: AND HERE HE IS NOW!
Kirk: Thank you everyone! Nice to see you! Thank you Olmec. Welcome to Legends of the Hidden Temple. The rooms are filled with lost treasures that are protected by mysterious Mayan temple guards. Only Olmec knows the legend about each of the treasures in his temple, (Towards Olmec) which one are we gonna hear about today?
Title: The Moat
Post by: Kornography17 on July 25, 2007, 12:17:29 PM
The Moat

(Camera now facing Olmec)
Olmec: The legend of the Lost Binoculars of Fredrick Fleet.
(Camera moves back to Kirk)
Kirk: Oh, the Lost Binoculars of Fredrick Fleet? Well one of these six teams (Pans to the moat) will have a chance to retrieve the Lost Binoculars, will it be: The Red Jaguars? (Camera moves down the line for each team) The Blue Barracudas? The Green Monkeys? The Orange Iguanas? The Purple Parrots? Or the Silver Snakes?

(Back to Kirk)
Kirk: Well they?ll have to pass some pretty physical and mental tests and in the end only one team will have the right to enter Olmecs temple, but first they?ll have to cross the moat and Olmec will tell us how they?ll have to do it today!

(To Olmec)
Olmec: Before you lies a net (Camera pans to the net) about ? the way across the moat and an ancient vine in the middle. When Kirk gives the signal, one partner will jump into the moat and grab the vine, return to their starting position, and swing toward the net. Grab tightly onto the vine and net, because if you fall, you?ll have to start again. Once on the net, climb over it and jump off, once you reach the other end, tag the spotter. That will be your partners signal to cross. When the second player crosses the moat, run over and hit the gong! (Kirk rings the green monkeys gong) (Camera zooms on Olmec) The first four teams to hit their gongs will go on to the next round!

(Pans to Kirk)
Kirk: Thank you Olmec, okay TEAMS!ARE YOU READY! (Camera positioned at the teams)
Teams: Yeah! (Back to Kirk)
Kirk: Olmec, are you ready?
Olmec: I?m Rock James Bitch!
Kirk: All right, teams on your mark! GET SET!?..GO!
Title: The Crossing
Post by: Kornography17 on July 25, 2007, 12:20:52 PM
Kirks Commentary of the Crossing


Kirk: And there they go! Off into that murky moat! Looks like the Red Jaguars are in the lead right now! Yes they are, they are the first to get back with the vine! And now the Orange Iguana is back! The Red Jaguar gets a good swing and, YES! He makes it onto the net. But the Blue Barracudas and the Silver Snakes are right behind them! OH! The Blue Barracuda falls off the net! He?s gonna have to give it another go! And the Orange Iguana does too! Looks like the Silver Snakes and the Red Jaguars are the first ones to get over the net! Now it will be their partners turn soon! The Red Jaguar is first! Silver follows suit now!
Man but the Orange Iguana is having some trouble getting over to the net! The dreaded net! Worse than those dreaded temple guards! Looks like the Purple Parrots are the third team with one across. OHHHHHHH! The Red Jaguar has fallen off now! She?s gotta hurry now! The Blue Barracudas are still stuck as well. YOU GOTTA GET A GOOD PUSH OFF THE DECK! There you go! JUST LIKE THAT SONG: HOLD ON! BE STRONG NOW! Whoa! I didn?t even notice the Purple parrots teammate is now over the net! We may have our first team! Yes! it?s the Purple Parrots! Now we need 3 more! Looks like it will be the Silver Snakes! Now the Orange Iguanas have one over! Oh and the Barracuda falls off the net again!  The green monkeys are close by too! They already have one player over as well! And we got the Silver Snakes across! We need two more teams! Only two! The pressures on! Here comes the Green Monkeys! Just a little more! THERE! AND THEY ARE ACROSS! One more slot is available! Looks like it will between the Red Jaguars and The Orange Iguanas! They are neck and neck! Oh this is gonna be a close one people! Here they go! They are over the net! Now it will be a sprint to the gong! Here they come! Red and Orange are on the deck! WHOS GONNA RING IN FIRST! ITS! ITS! RED! Oh my god! Wow, they had some trouble late but they held onto it, and going onto the Steps of Knowledge are the Red Jaguars! The Green Monkeys! The Purple Parrots! And The Silver Snakes! Orange Iguanas almost had it and the Blue Barracudas didn?t even get a partner across, but they are not going away empty handed, we have a great gift for them, and here is what it is!

Dee Baker: Its 2 Tickets to the 2007 Family Values Tour! Featuring KoRn, Evanesence, HellYeah,Fly Leaf, Atrayu, and many more!

Summary
This Moat Crossing was a pretty close one, not for the lead though, but for the fourth spot. The Red Jaguar beat the orange Iguanas by about a palms length! Other than that it was a pretty blah moat crossing.


Thats all i have right now! Stay tuned for part 2 of 4!

Oh BTW, in this version of Legends, the teams are now a little older (14-18 ) and due to mild language it gets a TV PG rating lol.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: The Ancient Warrior on July 26, 2007, 03:48:58 AM
i'm just gonna go ahead and say this:

i don't think it's a good idea to step up the age limits and rating of the show.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 26, 2007, 04:50:52 AM
Well I did cause then it would most likeley mean more mature contestants


BTW ill be finishing off part 2 (Steps of Knowlege) today so it should be up soon.
Title: Part 2
Post by: Kornography17 on July 26, 2007, 06:16:20 AM
The Steps of Knowledge

(Teams are now at the top of the steps with Kirk)
Kirk: As the quest continues its time for Olmec to tell us about the Legend of the Missing Binoculars of Fredrick Fleet, but pay attention cause your knowledge of the legend could bring you a step closer to the temple.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 26, 2007, 06:17:33 AM
The Legend
(Toward Olmec)
Olmec: One of the grandest passenger liners made in the 1910?s was the R.M.S Titanic.( pictures of the ship are shown like in all legends) Many claimed it to be unsinkable due to a double keel, and watertight bulkheads, which allowed it to stay afloat if the first 4 compartments or any 2 others were flooded. Many famous passengers were aboard the ship on its maiden voyage including lookout Fredrick Fleet. His job was to stay in the crows nest and lookout for any dangers ahead. During the voyage, many ice warnings were given to the Titanic?s wireless operator, but he dismissed them, thinking they were not a problem. On the night of April 14th, 1912,  the air was cold, and the sea ?Was like glass.? said one of the senior officers. Fredrick Fleet, and Reginald Lee were watching over the sea like vultures.
Fleet: Oi! You smell what I smell?
Lee: I don?t know? What you smell?
Fleet: Ice?
Lee: What are you talking about?
Fleet: Ice man! You know you can smell ice before you see it.
Lee: What a bunch of bull. I don?t see any. Where are your binoculars?
Olmec: Fleet searched for them but couldn?t find them!
Fleet: I don?t know? Must be in my cabin?
Olmec: As he said that, he spotted a dark looming object ahead of them. It was an iceberg!
Fleet rang the crows nest bell 3 times signaling to the bridge danger. Then he phoned the bridge to what was ahead. Sixth officer James Moody answered the phone.
Fleet: Hello! Are you there!
Moody: Yes, what do you see?
Fleet: ICEBERG! RIGHT AHEAD!
Moody: Okay.
Olmec: He hung up and ordered to make an evasive maneuver, but they were too late. The ship hit the berg and flooded the first 6 compartments. The ship was doomed. 2 hours and 40 minutes later, the ship sunk. Fleet said that the binoculars were in his room, but they were accidentally left in the port of Southampton  before he left. Lee and Fleet survived the sinking while Moody did not. Some time later the binoculars were found and eventually made their way to the temple. Your quest is to find the Missing Binoculars of Fredrick Fleet and bring it back here!
(Back to Kirk)
Kirk: Thank you Olmec, now if you please tell us where the binoculars are?
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 26, 2007, 06:17:57 AM
The Questions
(Camera zooms in on the binoculars)
Olmec: The Missing Binoculars of Fredrick Fleet can be found?in the Quicksand Bog.
Kirk: Okay now teams, you are now on the Steps of Knowledge, Olmec will be asking you questions about the legend shortly, if you think you know the answer I want you to stomp on the ancient marker in front of you, if your right, you will move down a step , if your wrong or run out of time. Ill give the other teams a chance to answer. The first 2 teams to make it to the bottom level, will move on to the Temple Games.
Okay, Olmec, we are ready for your first question?
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 26, 2007, 06:19:01 AM
Olmec: What year did the Titanic Sink? 1910, 1911, or 1912?
(Green rings in first)
Kirk: Green Monkeys?
Green Boy: 1910?
Olmec: Incorrect
(Purple Rings)
Kirk: Purple Parrots?
Purple Girl: 1912?
Olmec: That is correct!
(Purple Parrots celebrate)
Kirk: Allright Purple, you two can move down a step now. Olmec, next question?
Olmec: Where did the Titanic begin its voyage? Cherbourg, Southampton, or Que..
(Red Rings in)
Kirk: Red Jaguars?
Red Boy: Southampton?
Olmec: That is correct!
(red moves down)
Kirk: Okay Red Jaguars are on the board now, Green Monkeys and the Silver Snakes can still catch up. Next question?
Olmec: Who answered the phone on the bridge to get the iceberg w..
(Green Rings)
Kirk: Whoa! Green Monkeys?
Green Boy: Sixth Officer James Moody?
Olmec: Correct!
(Green teammates hug)
Kirk: Nice job Green Monkeys! We have a 3 way tie at the 2nd step! Next question?
Olmec: How long did it take the Titanic sink? 1 hour, 2 hours and 40 minutes, or 2 hours and 10 minutes?
(A sound effect is made 5 seconds later)
Olmec: Times up! The correct answer is 2 hours and 40 minutes.
Olmec: Where was the Titanic setting sail to? New York City, Bridgeport, or Virginia Beach?
(Red rings in)
Kirk: Red Jaguars?
Red Girl: New York City?
Olmec: That is correct.
Kirk: All right Red Jaguars! Now you are one step away from moving on to the Temple Games! Next Question.
Olmec: What do ships do to signal to nearby ships that they are in danger? Light white rockets, yell and scream, or?
(Green Rings)
Kirk: Green Monkeys?
Green girl: Light white rockets?
Olmec: That is correct!
Kirk: Now the Green Monkeys are just one step away from the temple games! Olmec next question?
Olmec: What is the current International Morse signal for ?Our Ship is sinking! Help us!?? C.Q.D, A.B.C, or S.O.S?
(Silver Rings)
Kirk: Silver Snakes?
Silver Boy: S.O.S?
Olmec: Correct!
Kirk: All right Silver Snakes are on the board! Next question?
Olmec: What does S.O.S stand for? Save our ship, Stand on Ship, or nothing?
(Purple rings)
Kirk: Purple Parrots?
Purple girl: Save our ship?
Olmec: incorrect.
(Silver rings)
Kirk: Silver Snakes?
Silver Boy: Nothing at all?
Olmec: That is correct.
Kirk: The Silver Snakes are now one step away from moving on! Next question?
Olmec: How many passengers survived the sinking? 1036,712, or 493?
(Red Rings in)
Kirk: Red Jaguars?
Red Girl: 712?
Olmec: That is correct!
Kirk: THE RED JAGUARS ARE GOING ONTO THE TEMPLE GAMES! We have one more spot available who will be in it? The Silver Snakes, Purple Parrots, or the Green Monkeys? Next question.
Olmec: What Lifeboat did Fredrick Fleet escape in? #1,#14, or #7?
(All ring in but Silver gets it first)
Kirk: Silver Snakes?
Silver Girl: 14!
Kirk: Incorrect
(The girl looks like she?s about to cry)
(Green Monkeys ring in)
Kirk: Green Monkeys?
Green Boy: number 1?
(Awkward pause)
Olmec: That is correct!
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 26, 2007, 06:20:41 AM
Kirk: THESE TWO TEAMS ARE GOING ON TO THE TEMPLE GAMES! IT?S THE RED JAGUARS! AND THE GREEN MONKEYS! Silver Snakes and Purple Parrots did a great job today, they are definitely not going away empty handed, we got a really nice gift for them, here is what it is!
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Kirk: These two teams are going to be fighting it out to make it to Olmecs temple! And they are going to do that right after this!

(Commercial)


Thats all i have for taoday stay tuned for part two!
So anyone have any predictions for whos gonna make it? I already know.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 26, 2007, 06:23:52 AM
i alos would like to say that i have finished 3 episodes, all 3 will have the same temple layout and games. ill tell you layout 2 soon, if you dont remember what layout one is here is what it is:

They should go in the order of the third season temple run footage.

1.The Crypt :Grab the books from the skeletons you know the drill.
2.The Tar Pit: a pit filled with sticky "Tar" which will make exiting the room difficult.
3.The Bell Storage:Pull down strings to make the bells toll and open a door.
4.The Chamber of the Sacred Markers:Place the markers on the correct tablet you know the drill.
5.The Room of the Ancient Warriors:Place yourself in the correct armor to open the door to (prepare yourself)
6.The SEEEEEEEEEEEALLLLLLLLL ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!:wait...what hte? wheres the shrine? I got rid of it, go ahead kill me. Anyways. There is a picture of a seal (Like the ones the kings and queens use on their letters) on the wall. You must find the right one and place it in the front of the room to open a door.
7.The Lightning Ball room: Plug in the power cords to create your own lightning.
8.The Water tank: After the lightning ball-passage door opens you must jump into the small pit of water and press a button to open the tank below.
9.The Quicksand Bog: Makes sense to have water go into this place right? Bash through the stone wall and enter...
10.The Knights Tomb: Similar to the Tomb of the headless king but instead of just a skull its a melmet on the skull.
11.The Mirror Maze:Its a Mirror maze (How shocking)
12.The Lazer Light Room: Find the white lazer to open a door.
13:The Ledges Ver 2:This version of the ledges will have tons of rocks blocking the way. And water falling from the cieling.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 26, 2007, 06:25:14 AM
Also, im a purple parrot now yayz!
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: PhantomBPR on July 26, 2007, 07:57:27 AM
Quote from: ""The Ancient Warrior""
i'm just gonna go ahead and say this:

i don't think it's a good idea to step up the age limits and rating of the show.


I personally don't see anything wrong with it TAW. If Korno wants to articulate the show in that fasion, there's no harm done, just a different way of writing Legends fanfiction.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 26, 2007, 09:08:06 AM
Thank you kindly. BTW If you guys didnt notice I referenced a new song from KoRn during the moat crossing. I just had to have some KoRn reference lol. The Temple games will be up later this afternoon, possibly
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: The Mandarin Hand on July 26, 2007, 09:12:47 AM
...yeah, no.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Turbo Barracuda on July 26, 2007, 01:49:46 PM
LOL
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 28, 2007, 01:50:52 PM
Sorry uys that its taking a while to get the temple games up, im trying to make them interesting and exciting to watch.Ill have em up probably on monday.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 30, 2007, 08:17:18 AM
Here we go part 3 of 4 sadly ive been behind further than i thougbht  iwould get cause of a power outage yesterday. Heres temple game number 1. Ill make it up to ya guys and get temple game 2 up today later

The Teams

(Back from commercial)
(Kirk is next to the two remaining teams)
Kirk: Welcome back to Legends, now the glory goes to the fastest and the strongest. But first lets get to know a little more about our teams. Now on the red Jaguars we have (Aims mic at red boy)
Red Boy: Gregory Clifton.
Kirk: And How old are you?
Greg: 16
Kirk: And I hear that you play guitar?
Greg: Yes I own an Ibanez.
Kirk: Well rock on brother (Makes punk sign) And you are? (Aims mic at red girl)
Red Girl: Jessie Littles.
Kirk: And how old are you?
Jessie: 17.
Kirk: I hear that you like to draw?
Jessie: Yes I have made many drawings. I even made a sketch of you next to Olmec!
Kirk: Oh my, I have an admirer, or perhaps Olmec does, LETS HEAR IT FOR THE RED JAGUARS!
(Audience applauds)
Kirk: And here on the Green Monkeys we have? (Aims mic at green boy)
Green Boy: Sherman Drijibi.
Kirk: And how old are you?
Sherman: 15
Kirk: It says here you collect die cast race cars?
Sherman: Yes its true.
Kirk: Who?s your favorite?
Sherman: Dale Jr?s 2004 Daytona 500 car.
Kirk: Heh that awesome. And who is this? (Aims mic at Green Girl)
Green Girl: I am Lucy Wurz
Kirk: And how old are you?
Lucy: 15
Kirk: It says here that you are from California?
Lucy: Yes
Kirk: Wow, that?s a long way from Florida, LETS HEAR IT FOR THE GREEN MONKEYS!
(Audience applauds)
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 30, 2007, 08:17:46 AM
Temple Game #1
Kirk: Okay teams you get into your positions while I tell the audience about the temple games. During the Temple Games, Teams will be competing to win (Takes out a pendant) Pendants of  Life. They need these pendants to protect them from those deadly temple guards as they make their way through the temple.  There are 3 temple games and Olmec will tell us about Temple Game #1.?
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 30, 2007, 08:18:05 AM
(To Olmec)

Olmec: Fredrick Fleet had to stay in the crows nest atop the forward mast all night to watch out for danger. The climb up was a tough one, as we are about to find out. When Kirk gives the signal (Camera pans to a huge structure containing trampolines every 5 feet up or so.) you will jump onto the trampolines and climb up to the top of the crows nest. When you reach the top, ring the bell 3 times to signal danger ahead! The team that rings the bell first, OR, the team that?s further along in 60 seconds wins!

Kirk: Okay, this is gonna be a long way up! Put 60 seconds on the clock??.on your mark?.get set??..GO!
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on July 30, 2007, 08:18:42 AM
Summary
60:game begins
56:Red Jaguars get up to level 2/10
55:Green Monkeys get up to level 2/10
53:Both teams make it up to level 3/10
50:Green Monkeys get up to level 4/10
46:Green Monkeys get up to level 5/10
45:Red Jaguars make it up to level 4/10
42:Green Monkeys make it up to level 6/10as the Red Jaguars make it up to level 5/10
Both teams get stuck at their level for a few seconds
32:Green Monkeys make it up to level 7/10
29:Red Jaguars make it up to level 6/10
27:Green Monkeys make it up to level 8/10
Red jaguars get stuck
24:Green Monkeys get up to level 9/10
20: Red Jaguars make it to level 7/10
16:Green Monkeys make it to the top and ring in first!

Kirk: All right that?s it !THAT?S IT! Okay looks like the Green Monkeys got to the top first. So they get the half pendant of life! (Audience claps) The Red Jaguars can still catch up in the 2nd game it is also worth a half pendant, Olmec, tell us about it?
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 04, 2007, 11:38:40 AM
Temple Game #2

Olmec: The Titanic?s owner James Bruce Ismay, claimed the Titanic was ?Unsinkable? but because the first 6 watertight compartments flooded, he was proven wrong. You are going to try and change history. In front of you is (camera moves and aims at a box with 6 holes in it.) the flooded compartments. When Kirk gives the signal, you will choose which compartment to block the flow of water. If you are right,you get a point and then choose another hole to plug, but, if you?re wrong, you will be squirted with ice water . The team with the most points after 60 seconds wins.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 04, 2007, 11:39:15 AM
The Game

(To Kirk)
Kirk: Oh my, this is going to be frickin cold! Trust me I know. Lets put 60 seconds on the clock.
(Clock appears)
Kirk: teams chose a watertight compartment please?
(Red chooses #3 while Green chooses #1)
Kirk: On your mark?.get set?.SQUIRT!
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 04, 2007, 11:40:26 AM
0:60 (correct compartment=3) Red and Green get squirted 0-0
0:56 Red chooses #2 as does Green
0:53 ( Correct compartment=2) Both score 1-1
0:49 Red chooses #1 while Green chooses #6
0:47 (Correct compartment=6) Red gets squirted. Green Scores 1-2 Green
0:44 Red chooses #5 while Green chooses #4
0:40 (correct compartment=5) Green gets squirted Red scores 2-2
0:39 Red chooses #1 while Green chooses #4
0:35 (correct compartment=3) both teams get squirted 2-2
0:31 Red Chooses #6 while Green chooses #3
0:27 (Correct compartment=6) Green gets squirted while Red Scores 3-2 Red
0:22 Red chooses #5 while Green chooses #2
0:17 (correct compartment=5) Green gets squirted while Red scores 4-2 Red
0:14 Red chooses #2 while Green chooses #4
0:11 (correct compartment=4) Red Squirts while Green Scores 4-3 Red
0:06 Red chooses #5 while Green chooses #1
0:01 (Correct compartment=1) Red gets squirted while Green scored 4-4


Kirk: TIMES UP! THAT?S IT! Okay, We are getting confirmation that the last point did count, it beat the clock. So it?s a tie!  They both get a half pendant of life! (Audience cheers) This gives The Green Monkeys 1 pendant and The Red Jaguars a half. But they can catch up in the 3rd and final game, its worth a full pendant! Olmec what is the final game?
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 04, 2007, 12:11:48 PM
Temple Game #3

(To Olmec)
Olmec: Many of the 1500 people who were lost died due to the freezing cold water. But 6 people were saved from the cold. You are about to do the same. When Kirk gives the signal (Camera pans to a small wooden boat with wheels on the bottom) one teammate will row across the sea and get to the other side. When they do, allow your partner to get in the boat and row back to safety. The first team to save their partner, or the team who gets further along after 60 seconds?wins!
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 04, 2007, 12:13:38 PM
The Game
Kirk: okay, this is for the temple! Put 60 seconds on the clock?.On your mark?.get set?GO!

Red pulls away fast but Green isn?t much further behind. Red gets halfway across with 53 seconds left, 2 seconds later Green gets halfway. Red then gets across to the other side with 46 seconds left. The teammate gets in the boat really fast and makes the turn around with 40 seconds left. Green gets across with 44 left and their teammate gets in faster and leaves at the same time as Red! The two teams are drag racing to the dock! But OH NO! GREEN?S BOAT CAPSIZES! (It tipped over XD ) Red gets across and steps on the dock with 21 seconds remaining.

Kirk: THAT?S IT! All right Red Jaguars
(The Red teams about to explode in joy while Green is about to explode in anger)
The Red Jaguars get across the sea first and get the full pendant! That gives them 1 and a half. The Green Monkeys have 1. THE RED JAGUARS ARE GOING TO THE TEMPLE

(Red Jaguars go nuts as audience cheers)
Kirk: Green Monkeys did a great job, they are not going away empty handed, we got a great gift for them and here is what it is!

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Kirk: The Red Jaguars made a gallant  comeback  that will work out for them! WERE GONNA FIND OUT IF THE RED JAGUARS CAN ENTER OLMECS TEMPLE, RETRIEVE THE MISSING BINOCULARS OF FREDRICK FLEET, RIGHT AFTER THIS!

(Commercial)
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 04, 2007, 12:13:59 PM
Temple run coming soon!
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 07, 2007, 05:47:28 PM
The Temple
(Camera aims at Kirk in between Greg and Jessie)
Kirk: Welcome back to Legends, Jessie and Greg have proven themselves worthy and have earned the right to enter Olmecs temple. But first, lets hear what Olmec has to say about the temple?.

(To Olmec)
Olmec:?.you could start, by running up the stairs to the Crypt! (Pre-recorded temple footage, all first person view)?rab the book from the skeletons?and pass into the Tar Pit?navigate through the tar and go up into the Bell Storage! Pull the ropes down to make the bells toll and lead you into the Chamber?of the Sacred Markers?match the symbols on the right , to the runes on the left, and pass into the Room, of the Ancient Warriors?.place yourself in the correct armor, to open the door to the SEEEEEEEEEEEEEAL ROOM! Place the correct seal on the central pedestal that may open the door to?the Lightning Ball Room! Connect the power cords to create your own lightning that will open the door to the Water tank! There you can get sucked into the Quicksand Bog where you can smash through to the Knights Tomb. Pull the vines to release their bones, and attach the missing skull to its proper knight. Which will open the door to, the Mirror Maze. If you escape, you may have a chance to enter, the Laser Light Room. Unleash the power of the special white laser that could open the door into the pit. Then?race through the pit, CLIMB THROUGH THE LEDGES! RACE DOWN THE STAIRS AND BACK?THROUGH THE TEMPLE GATE! The choices are yours and yours alone?

Ill put the rest up tommorrow, itss too late :( you'll have to wait one more day, its painful I know
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 08, 2007, 06:07:48 AM
Olmec: You won 1 and a half pendants in the temple games?whose going in first?
Greg: I AM!
Olmec: Very well?Gregory?when Kirk gives the signal, you will race through the gates, into the temple, and make your way towards the Lost Binoculars?.hidden inside the temple are temple guards, assigned to protect 3 specific rooms. If you are caught, you can trade your pendant for an extra life and go on, BUT! If your caught without a pendant, you?ll be taken out of the temple?and it will be Jessie?s turn to enter and try her luck?hidden somewhere in the temple is the other half of your pendant. If you find it, you will get an extra life?.if you can reach the missing binoculars, ALL OF THE DOORS OF THE TEMPLE WILL INSTANTLY UNLOCK! AND THE TEMPLE GUARDS WILL VANISH!?.return through the gates with the Missing Binoculars of Fredrick Fleet in 3 minutes, and both of you will be handsomely rewarded?.AND HERES HOW!
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 08, 2007, 06:08:33 AM
Dee Baker: FIRST YOUR GONNA GET 1000 DOLLARS! Spend it on video games, skateboards, crack, I DON?T GIVE A FLYING F&%K! JUST USE IT! IF YOU CAN GRAB THE MISSING BINOCULARS BEFORE THREE MINUTES IS UP THEN YOU WILL BOTH BE GETTING A ROLEX WATCH! Use it if you like, but I?d sell it and spend the money on Video games, skateboards, crack, I DON?T GIVE A S^$T WHAT YOU USE IT ON! If you get the Missing Binoculars out of the temple before 3 minutes is up ,you?ll both be GOING TO AMSTERDAM! Enjoy their finest youth hostel, go to the local dance clubs, eat hash brownies, and of course the vacation isn?t complete without a trip to the RED LIGHT DISTRICT!
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 08, 2007, 06:08:52 AM
(To Kirk)
Kirk: Wow Amsterdam, that sounds fun! Well lets try to get you there?.okay Greg?get into your position??put three minutes on the clock?..Olmec, lower your gate please.
(gate lowers)
Kirk: On your mark?.get set?.GO!
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 08, 2007, 06:10:05 AM
Kirks Commentary
UP HE GOES INTO THE TEMPLE! Which way will he go though?looks like the crypt! He?s going to have to pull the boo, he does and a door opens nice job on the first skeleton! This brings him into that dreaded Tar Pit! OH MY THAT?S DISGUSTING! He?s having some trouble?he?s going to try entering the Chamber of the Sacred markers, nope that wont open, looks like there?s only one way to go?down into the Light Laser room! He?s going to have to pull the tile?TEMPLE GUARD! Wow that startled him for a moment, but he has to make up some time now, he?s kind of lost now?.PULL THE TILES! There you go! Where?s that white light! Come on! There it is! Up he goes now into the Chamber of the Markings! He has to find the symbols first. Wait?HE POINTS OUT THE HIDDEN HALF PENDANT HIDDEN IN THE CHAMBER! Nice move there! He has 2:10 left. Just match the symbols! LIGHT FLASHES AND A DOOR OPENS! Looks like he?s going to go to the Room of the A, no wait! He?s going into the Bell Storage! You got to pull the vines tightly now! Nope that one doesn?t work, Jessie?s patiently waiting, she could go at any time. Man he?s having some bad luck with those ropes. Oh! There you go! And the door to the Room of the Ancient Warriors is open! Place yourself into that armor! Lets hope a temple guard isn?t in one! Nope the first one didn?t work, and?the 2nd one does but TEMPLE GUARD! Jessie goes off! She has only 1:10 seconds to get to the bog! WOAH NICE DIVE INTO THE PIT! Into the Laser Light, she is making up for lost time really well now! She grabs the half pendant! She may need that later! Oh my she goes straight to the Ancient Warriors, nice move! Now into the Seal Room! 48 seconds to go! Just 2 rooms away! Where?s the correct Seal now! There it is, she puts it on the pedestal?.and?which door opens? She doesn?t seem to notice any?wait! She?s going down! Into the Knights Tomb! Is she just going to bust through ! SHE DOES! SHES GOT THE BINOCULARS! ALL THE DOORS ARE OPEN! She?s going into the se..OH SHE SLIPS ON THE WATER FROM THE WATER TANK! She has only 25 seconds! Up she goes now! 20 seconds! This is going to be close folks! INTO THE ANCIENT WARRIOR! UP THE STAIRS INTO THE BELL STORAGE! 10 seconds! To the pit! 3-2-1...OHHHHH! She ran out of time in the pit! She came so close, but hey, you still get the Rolex watch and money!  But that?s all for today! Join us again next time for more adventures and another great legend of?THE HIDDEN TEMPLE! Buh-bye
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 08, 2007, 06:11:05 AM
Time Line


Greg
3:00: Enters Temple
2:57: Enters Crypt opens door on first try
2:51: Enters Tar Pit
2:36: Enters laser Light Room
2:34:TEMPLE GUARD!
2:14: Enters Chamber of the Sacred markers
2:12: Points out hidden half pendant
2:00: Enters The Bell Storage
1:32: Enters Room of the Ancient Warriors
1:14: Temple Guard!

Jessie
1:10: Enters Temple
1:07: Enters Pit
1:01: Enters laser Light Room
0:57: Enters Chamber of the Sacred markers
0:54: Grabs hidden half pendant
0:51: Skips the Bell storage and  goes straight into the Room of the Ancient Warriors
0:48: Enters Seal room wastes time finding seal
0:34: Enters The Knights Tomb
0:31: Busts through stone wall into the Quicksand Bog
0:29: SHE GRABS THE BINOCULARS! ALL THE DOORS UNLOCK. She heads up the ladder to the seal room, but slips on water tank water.
0:20: Enters Seal Room
0:15: Enters Room of the Ancient Warriors
0:08: Enters Bell Storage
0:03: Enters the Tar Pit
GAME OVER!

Join me soon as We continue the quest. Next episode: The original Copy of ?The Communist Manifesto?

Id apreciate it if someone would make a temple diagram of the temple run. Please help me out here.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: The Ancient Warrior on August 12, 2007, 03:12:59 PM
I honestly didn't find this to be that good of a fanfic.  Color me a stickler for realism, but here comes the list of constructive criticism that'll sound too harsh:

- i suppose there's nothing wrong with profanity and such, but i just don't see Nickelodeon ever making a series quite like this.  EVER.

- The way Dee announced the Temple Run prizes sounded especially rude, and part of what makes a good game show host is the ability to keep a cheerful and friendly persona.  No offense, but it sounds like you're making fun of the show.

- Also, and in a slight change of topic, i think it'd be a much easier and smoother read if each episode from here on could be condensed into less than ten posts.  Try merging pieces of the show into a single post.  For example, the opening, introduction of teams, Moat description and Moat itself could all be typed in the same post instead of four consecutive ones.



However, i do like the way you make a timeline for the Temple Run and each Temple Game to explain everything, and the choices of legends are intresting.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 16, 2007, 06:21:05 PM
:( I am saddened by your last post,i love the show and am in no way mocking the show, I just have a [rather crude] sense of humor. Ill try to fix the posts next episode.
Title: Legends of the Hidden Temple: The Return! Episode #1
Post by: Kornography17 on August 16, 2007, 06:28:33 PM
Also, can anyone please make a temple diagram of this run! I really would apreciate it!